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Wednesday, March 05, 2008

一面湖水



錯過 二十年前那場美麗的約會
這回 我趕上了

今晚 你是從天而降美麗的天女
悄悄 一字一句對我唱著過往
暗夜 悸動的星語

一個人 終究走了過來
過去心 還給過往的歲月
現在心 彷彿一池清水
深邃幽遠 清澈透明

留下 岸上的飛鳥 
追逐 船拂過後的水紋
遠了 微微淡淡
化了

映照在湖裡 天空的倒影
點頭 微微一笑
懂了

你也一樣 天地賜予你的蛻變
如一朵清靜的蓮花
一面湖水

蓮花處處開 這花香
在靜靜的 湖上

有人說 高山上的湖水 
是躺在地球表面上的一顆眼淚
那麼說 我枕畔的眼淚
就是掛在你心田的一面湖水
一面湖水 一面湖水

紅塵之外 你我都在
一面湖水 是你我如如的心

Note: 齊豫、齊秦「天使與狼」演唱會後記 / 2008.3.1 台北

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  • At 3/05/2008, Anonymous Anonymous said…

    she only has 2 beautiful sentences. i don't have any feelings on those 2 sentences at all. but, my friend, yours have a lot of layers than just 2 "空灵的短句”.

    maybe because i don't know her at all. anyway, i still think poem should have more meannings than beautiful words. even poem is the extract of juicy life, still a poet need more details to explain the abstract words.

    i like your much more than hers :)

     
  • At 3/05/2008, Blogger ellen's attic said…

    am i writing a poem?.....i don't know :)

    she was singing my beloved song 星 and 答案 that night which brought me back to the past... lingering on past for few minutes, however we always knew we got to move on in our ways.

    then i heard her another beautiful song 一面湖水, it's the first time i heard this song. at that moment, the poetic and emotional personal feelings to me was more than a poem or a song i thought or the lyrics and the melody drove me to have some other imagination afterward.

    this song just like a little stone throwing into the still, mirror lake created more and more ripples, circles and a splash within my heart which made me to write some words after that concert.

    my friend, you know me more than her :)

     

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